I think that what you posted was actually very reasonable. However, think about this, suppose you were to create a killer headline? I am not saying your content is not good, however suppose you added a headline to maybe grab a person’s attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is a little vanilla. You might glance at Yahoo’s home page and see how they create article headlines to grab viewers to open the links. You might add a video or a picture or two to get people interested about everything’ve written. In my opinion, it might make your posts a little bit more interesting.
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